E.P. Glixman
The challenge this week at Inspire Me Thursday is lace. Here is my poem in progress, my first draft. Since it is Valentines Day, I thought about hearts and flowers and lacy things. I guess Cupid loves lace. It is everywhere on this holiday. Angela's
You might think you've entered a room
where everything is covered
with luxurious lace. You are right
You've entered a space with signs on walls
that read for the demure, the daring, the darling
The room is full of searching people like your neighbor
eighty year old Mrs.Rodriguez
hiding her Valentines Day hearts and flower thong
trimmed with neon pink lace in her bony hand
No one would have ever guessed
This is the way the world should be everyday
a shopping spree - a surprise-
All women are madonas goddesses
mistresses of the dark
in black lace and high heels and
then there are the women who are told
not to be women
who need to take care of their
deepest yin
This store is not a place of weeping and sighs
of threats and phrases
I am leaving you
Don't expect child support
And it is not a place where you pick up dry cleaning
or tell the judge how your significant other cheated
It is a place of
Revelation
Emancipation
Freedom
A declaration
I am a lover of lace and soft things
at Angela's Lingerie store
where everything is covered
with luxurious lace. You are right
You've entered a space with signs on walls
that read for the demure, the daring, the darling
The room is full of searching people like your neighbor
eighty year old Mrs.Rodriguez
hiding her Valentines Day hearts and flower thong
trimmed with neon pink lace in her bony hand
No one would have ever guessed
This is the way the world should be everyday
a shopping spree - a surprise-
All women are madonas goddesses
mistresses of the dark
in black lace and high heels and
then there are the women who are told
not to be women
who need to take care of their
deepest yin
This store is not a place of weeping and sighs
of threats and phrases
I am leaving you
Don't expect child support
And it is not a place where you pick up dry cleaning
or tell the judge how your significant other cheated
It is a place of
Revelation
Emancipation
Freedom
A declaration
I am a lover of lace and soft things
at Angela's Lingerie store
1 comment:
Nice photo and poem. Loved how you ended it, too. Sincerely, Connie
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